Saturday, July 28, 2007

Thoughts on "Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows"


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I finally finished "Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows," pushing through the last third of the book in a marathon session that started around midnight and kept me up until 5 AM.

"Hallows" is ultimately a thrilling and satisfying read. Although Rowling's weaknesses are as present as ever, including her sometimes clunky language (as when one character experiences grief "like a physical wound") and tendency to pile on one plot convolution too many (the circuitous logic of the "Elder Wand," like Crouch's Polyjuice impersonation of Mad-Eye and Hermione's time-turner before it, is an unnecessary strain on credibility), so are her strengths as an inventive world-builder and emotionally-wrenching storyteller. Most importantly, Rowling delivers on every promise she's ever made and answers every question she's posed over the course of her seven-book series, from the crucial (ie, What is the source of the connection between Harry and Voldemort? What motivates the morally ambiguous Snape?) to the more marginal (was anyone else as happy as I was to finally have explained the oft-referenced historical tensions between goblins and Wizards, or the secret Dumbledore had on Petunia Dursley?) Along the way, she packs in many reference points to past adventures, staisfying hardcore fans while simultaneously reminding readers how deeply earned a climax this is. In contrast to the lackluster "Half-Blood Prince," the stakes start high and only intensify. I've been reading a great deal of fiction this summer, including some heavy/classic lit, and this is the only thing to draw actual tears, leaving me shaking and huddled in the corner. There's something to be said for that.

At the same time...

I have questions about the text's thematic resonance. Its ultimate message has something to do with self-sacrifice and the true meaning of courage and heroism. Which is all well and good, but also a little bit simple and moralistic.

There's a darkness and a moral complexity that's always swirled around the margins, and sometimes the forefront, of Rowling's texts, keeping me riveted but also leaving me wanting more.

Here, Rowling introduces the powerful symbolism of Harry and Voldemort's fates intertwined; Harry discovers a portion of Voldemort's soul lives within him, then discovers that he cannot die while Voldemort lives, as his own blood runs through Voldemort's veins. This is a notion of good and evil as interdependent -- neither can exist without the other -- that is philosophically resonant.

Too bad, then, that Rowling dilutes this symbolism with the perhaps more comforting but less truthful assertion that good may indeed exist in the absence of evil, so long as we kick evil's ass. And all the better if good comes in the form of that most trusted harbinger that happy days are here again -- the heterosexual family.

The politics of Rowling's texts have always been impressively complex. She shows that Voldemorts are created as much through collective complacency and complicity as they are through their own initiative. Here, we see how the Death Eaters' rise to power is accomplished through the strategic and methodical management of fear and deeply-imbeded ideologies of Wizard supremacy. In Dolores Umbridge, Rowling has written one of the most chillingly accurate representations of the political animals that manage our world and of the banal evil that traipses through our governments, churches and schools with a bright-pink bow in its hair and a broad smile spread across its face.

One of my favorite Harry Potter moments comes shortly after Harry's first encounter with Voldemort at the conclusion of "The Goblet of Fire," when Dumbledore underscores the need to atone for Wizards' injustices toward other magical creatures in order to effectively counteract Voldemort, then sends out his agents to begin building coalitions. In "Hallows's" final battle, some of the most thrilling moments come from supporting players, as Molly Weasley kicks some LeStrange ass, Neville decapitates Nagini, thestrals and a hippogriff help Thrawp fight malevolent giants, the centaurs enter the fray and Kreacher commands an army of house elves. All of which leaves me all the more disappointed with Rowling's contention that Potter-like, Christ-like (is it any surprise that Harry's patronus is a stag, often used to represent Jesus?) martyrs and figure-heads are necessary to galvanize collective action. I look forward to reaching a point as a culture (cultures) where we truly DON'T need another hero to believe that there's hope.

So here's how I wish it had gone:

Harry defeats Voldemort, but discovers that it is not possible to destroy the piece of Voldemort's soul that lives inside himself. In the final frame, the Voldemort in Harry challenges us to recognize our own will to power. Voldemorts can be overthrown, but the conditions that create Voldemorts remain in place. How many of us live our lives as the Dolores Umbridges, Percy Weasleys and Aberforth Dumbledores of the world, pledging our allegiance to the status quo or "looking out for number one"? Harry's journey is at its core a "coming of age" story. For me, this means acknowledging that our struggles with evil are ultimately lifelong.

6 comments:

julie said...

wonderful review!

i agree wholeheartedly that as a text for adults, it's disappointing that rowling did not stray from the tried-and-true hero story.

however, for children (as this book ultimately is aimed at those of all ages), this book delivers spot-on. there is a happy ending for the main characters, but some of the "good guys" are sacrificed. many children's books today are so politically correct and watered down that kids are not getting exposed to death, and therefore can't handle it when they experience loss in real life.

when i read this to my son (we're currently on book 5), i plan to talk with him about the deaths of some of the characters to help him begin learning how to deal with this huge fact of life.

all in all, it's still, as you said, a thrillingly entertaining novel. thanks again for the great and frank review!

Tim Jones-Yelvington said...

Thanks for the feedback!

I see your point, but also have concerns...

I can see how for children, the general sense of peace and tranquility that pervades the ending, esp. during the epilogue, the feeling that Harry can finally relax, and has found the community he's always sought, might be a comforting thing.

But I still have questions about the glorification of self-sacrifice and virtually blind faith in God-like authority figures like Dumbledore, perhaps even more so when children are involved.

Most especially within the midst our current fucked up war, is it really the best thing to be teaching children that courage means the willingness to die for a cause or an idea? Perhaps real courage means defying the warmongers, acknowledging that good and evil co-exist and are often difficult to delineate or define, and resisting the compulsion to label others evil and attempt to annihilate them.

julie said...

i agree that blindly following those in authority is not something to teach children. however, i don't think that rowling was making the point that harry was dying for a cause. i believe he was making a personal sacrifice for his friends and family. he wasn't trying to save the wizarding world- he was trying to save very individual and meaningful people: ron, hermione, etc.

one of the pervading themes in rowling's series has been that your 'family' - whether that means godparents, adoptive parents, natural parents, whatever - is more important than anything else.

look at her major villain: voldemort- rejected by his father and his mother dead. turns to a life of evil partially based on the trauma that befalls him in his childhood and partially based on his inability to find acceptance and understanding anywhere.

her major hero: harry- both parents dead and raised by an abomination of a muggle 'family.' overcomes this trauma partially based on the love he finds elsewhere- his ability to rely on the weasleys, hermione, sirius, and hagrid.

one of the most memorable points of the book, for me, was when harry told lupin off for wanting to come along for the adventure: "parents should be with their children!"

rowling has said in interviews that she doesn't believe in fate, so i don't think that this was about voldemort's and harry's fates being intertwined. she was very careful in earlier books (and pardon me, i'm at work and don't have them with me, so i can't give a particular reference) that voldemort could have chosen neville. he took the prophecy too literally, and by choosing harry, he made harry the one who would bring about his downfall.

i think, for rowling, this was a personal battle for harry. he was making a sacrifice for himself and his pieced-together family. for ron, hermione, and the weasleys, he wanted to provide something that he never had- the stability of a home not torn apart by death.

i could say more, but alas, the grindstone calls.

thanks for the insightful and intelligent discussion!

julie said...

Well, I had a rather eloquently-written response to your concerns, and for some reason the comment didn’t post, so now I’m trying to reconstruct what I wrote before. I’m sure I won’t be nearly as poetic, but let’s give it a shot:

I agree that teaching children to blindly follow authority figures is unwise and wrong for them. However, I didn’t interpret the story to mean that Harry died for a cause or idea. One of the main focuses of the entire HP series is the importance of family, and I think that Rowling meant Harry’s sacrifice as a personal one.

Rowling has stated before that she doesn’t believe in fate, and that Harry and Voldemort did not have a destiny to meet. She is careful to make the point in one of the previous books (and because I am at work I don’t have the actual text to reference, sorry) that Voldemort could just as easily have picked Neville, who also fit the prophecy. By choosing Harry, Voldemort was choosing his own downfall. There wasn’t any fate involved. From this, I infer that Rowling didn’t necessarily mean her story to be an epic battle of good and evil. She wanted to tell the story of Harry’s world, and the main problem, in Harry’s eyes, is the lack of security and home that a real family provides.

Foremost, Rowling’s major hero and villain become what they are mainly because of family issues. Voldemort becomes evil after suffering the rejection of his father and the death of his mother. His only home is Hogwarts, and the turning point for his character is when he is denied the DADA teaching position. He has once again been rejected by that which he considered to be his family, and begins his truly evil quest.

Harry, who lost his family and suffered through years of abuse at the hands of the horrible Dursleys, found his own makeshift family with Hermione, Ron, the Weasleys, Sirius, and Hagrid. The love and acceptance he found there, combined with the loss of his parents, made him realize that the most important thing in the world is family.

One of the most memorable parts of the book for me, where Rowling says it outright, is when Harry tells Lupin off for wanting to join the trio on their journey: “Parents should be with their kids!”

So, when the time comes to make his sacrifice, Harry is not thinking of ‘saving the world’ or ‘ridding the world of evil.’ He is thinking of Ron, Hermione, and all the others. His sacrifice is personal. He wants to save his new family from having to experience the same loss and pain he did- of losing *everything* and having to rebuild.

As for your point on good and evil coexisting, I definitely agree. Having everyone’s lives be *so* trouble free in the end was really stretching it. I think Rowling could have worked out a way to show that not all the evil was vanquished, just the “major” evil of Voldemort. However, as Rowling perhaps wasn’t viewing her work as a good-vs-evil saga, her personal happy ending was more appropriate.

Anyway, I could say more, but I must place my nose back on the grindstone here at the office. Thanks again for the intelligent and insightful discussion!

KDeLap said...

In response to earlier comments, in some ways the deaths are still very tidy, and seem to occur in pairs. No one (save the poor Weasley twins, who are in some ways the true heroes) is left without their partner. Even Bellatrix and Voldemort die together. So this pairing of deaths really tidies up the ending (perhaps for the children...) and does offer a lasting tranquility.

Indeed, much of the downfall of the last book is Harry's angst about being the martyr. He did not realize from the beginning that he was to "die" (his death is such a Jesus/Lazarus/every sci-fi book ever story that it is very trite). However, he did feel that it was _his_ battle, and everyone else was trying to protect him. His guilt is painful to the reader, as it need not exist - or at least not in the depths it is described. The other characters truly do want to fight Voldemort, for the greater good, their children's future, or simply personal vendettas. But it is very much their fight as well. Certainly Kreacher deserves to be on the front lines just as much as Harry. Harry's self-importance certainly blinds him to the larger reality of his fellow "good" fighters.

In the juxtaposition of good vs. evil, we do see more in this book that there are multiple sides to every character. We see in Ron, Snape, Kreacher, even Molly, the side that had not quite been revealed to us. Therefore good and evil battles itself inside every being, not just the larger structure. However, that good can triumph without fail is a weak spot...which leads to a weak last line. Going out on him touching a now-useless scar was certainly anti-climatic (though aren't we glad he's reproduced!)

Overall, she struggles to conform to a larger logic, in overarching plot as well as small details. This certainly stems from her method of book-writing - not addressing the whole world in the beginning, but making it up as she goes along (her encyclopedia should have come first) - as well as her personal struggles with her own mother's death. It must be hard to write a children's book, with death as a major plotline, as therapy for your own grief.

Good discussion, everyone.

Tim Jones-Yelvington said...

Julie, thanks for reminding me how rooted this text is in a specific set of relationships and in Harry's desire (quest?) for family.

I think the importance of Harry's sacrifice being on behalf of his friends and family should perhaps be made more central within the text itself. As it stands, it occurs quite separately from the community he's attempting to protect, and seems distinctly linked with notions of Harry as chosen one and child set-apart, as I think Kristen's comments underscore.

The desire to see all fantasy hero characters reject what is expected of them and reject their chosen-ness (which I think I link with a rejection of patriarchy and heteronormativity) is without question my own bias. As is my desire and tendency as a Queer critic to question the value of "family" both metaphorically and as an institutional reality (see my previous entry, "Militarism and the Family on Battlestar Galactica.")

I think it's important for me to remember that Rowling's idea of family is both linked with AS WELL AS distinct from the heteronormative/patriarchal ideal of Family-with-a-capital-F, and emerges from her own experiences as a single mother. To bring this focus on relationality into a genre that has been decidedly masculinist is a valuable feminizing -- if inconsistently feminist -- project.